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September 29, 2012
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Original Image Copyright (C): *SasukiMimochi

What is this? A redline is when one artist draws over another artist's work as a teaching tool to point out mistakes and give advice. These redlines were solicited by the original redline owner as a way of learning - and were given freely, no credit required. If you are interested in getting a redline, check out my weekly redline journal (usually posted on friday) to sign up! Rules are listed there.

I hope other artists are able to glean useful information out of this :3
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*SasukiMimochi Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
ah thank you, i didn't notice all that was wrong with it (even though i had done it quickly).
but the wing shape was on purpose. they're just for show, he doesnt really use them to fly v 7 v ~
but gosh his chest... didn't think about it till now. :'D gosh i think this is the first time you've found so many problems that i weren't aware of- thank you ; v ;
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=DarlingMionette Sep 29, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
XD you're welcome~ lol don't beat yourself up over it though - I go into this looking for things to point out, so I notice a lot more right off than most would XD
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*SasukiMimochi Sep 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
hehe i know, i'm just so surprised~ at first i was wondering if there was enough to look at with it, because i didn't hate it as much as when i made it. i'm happy you found the mistakes- it makes it easier for me to improve without going out and looking up references all the time, when i should be working on commissions. (which really i'm behind on :'D)
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=DarlingMionette Sep 30, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
XD haha I know the feeling. I'm finally update to date with all my commissions but i'm waiting for the shit to hit the fan LOL i have a handful of commissions that were put on hold because people weren't ready for them or couldn't decide what they wanted, and I just know that one of these days they're all going to message me at once -_- LOL
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*SasukiMimochi Sep 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
lol :'D i know that must be rough. you're alot more popular than me after all. i bet you have so many ; v ;
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=DarlingMionette Sep 30, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
XD i'm certainly not complaining about having lots of commissions :3 but lol it can get stressfull -_- I never have time to draw anything for myself lol
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*SasukiMimochi Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
aww. yeah, i like drawing for myself alot more- but i came up with a neat way to mix it up so it isnt so hard. v 7 v i'm going to do adopts alot more, that way i can be creative and it takes less time. and sketch commissions on the side~
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