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What is this? A redline is when one artist draws over another artist's work as a teaching tool to point out mistakes and give advice. These redlines were solicited by the original redline owner as a way of learning - and were given freely, no credit required. If you are interested in getting a redline, check out my weekly redline journal (usually posted on friday) to sign up! Rules are listed there.

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Mood: Delighted ~EnigmaticEnigma Sep 9, 2012  Student General Artist
thank you for the tips mio :)
idk y i thought a flat looking ribcage seemed right, redrawing it in my head with your skeleton does make it look significantly better
as for the scythe...uhhh..well...
yeah i was just messing with it perspective wise, trying to get that sort of anime weapon swooping across the camera effect, idk if u get what i mean but yeah i exaggerated its curve way to much
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=DarlingMionette Sep 9, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
XD welcome! yah I know what you're trying for with the scythe and honestly i dunno how to fix it either. haha I SUCK at curved perspectives -_- you have no idea how many times I tried to doodle a sketch up of what it should look like and failed. LOL i'm not much help there :3
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~EnigmaticEnigma Sep 9, 2012  Student General Artist
Photo Reference! >:D and its alright, thanks again for the redline :)
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